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Days were waves and splashed their foam,

Mooning away under the flickering dome.

Come now, taste my barmy wave and leer

Сursing the night that made you roam.

Reviews

[Neon]

A night comes in a hope to burn a candle and spread the light ... as same as a light a day comes with the new morning in a hope to make a life bright and spread the lights to get rid of the darkness of nights ...
A very nice poem you penned but i'd say it's a very nice thought of yours you dropped into the form of a poem.

[Mariam]

thanks for stopping by and your kind review! :)

[Neon]

My pleasure!
But..here in this piece, i really felt something unique, something special to read ... may be it's coz you wrote it from the depth of yer heart. I really felt the piece and even am still analysing yer this cool write on my mind to think about it more to know the deep meanings as well as the depth of the write.

Thanks for penning the piece.

[Mariam]

Glad to know this) Nice that I can share such feelings with you

[emmajoy]

I'm truly unsure.. is this a witty little naughty or a touch of genuine delight?! Either way, you've certainly worked the meter and come up with a fine four liner, Mariam. Must read more, sorry it's been a while. Happy new happies.

[Mariam]

Haha thx for stopping by!

[Ruairidh]

The metaphor of the opening line is sublime, as your poem (and its subtle story) sets into immediate motion. The change of tense and tone in the last two lines work well. I like your poems drawn out of the sea :)

[Mariam]

thanks a lot :) glad that you like it

[Scott Metro]

A pleasant little ditty.....they all come home...either in this time...sometimes in the next...or the next...or the next.

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Mariam]

Thanks for stopping by)

[Scott Metro]

:) ...........

S.

[Michelle N. H.]

These words are like brushstrokes with the movement of an ocean's waves. I love where this poem took me visually..

[Mariam]

Thanks for stopping by truly)

[Michelle N. H.]

But you're welcome. It was my pleasure :)

[smilempsn]

Short and nice piece..
Almost creating a very creative image..

[Mariam]

thanks for stopping by) Glad that you like

[smilempsn]

welcome :)

[Distantview123]

Some interesting imagery, poetically presented here. ~ Robert.

[Mariam]

thanks for your kind review!

[Rahul]

Very stunning write :) I enjoyed this piece much, you're now reaching out, Mariam. I'm really glad to read your work again :) Beautiful poem with your stunning thoughts.

[Mariam]

oh thanks for your kind review, Rahul. Why did you block your page?

[Rahul]

Your welcome... i'm just trying to get into my real life again from here from this site because i became addicted to this site.. lol so i did :)