Needing Paint

Needing Paint

A Poem by Trée
"

Trev watching Em paint.

"

Holding on

the death of me
 
Letting go
the fear of me
 
Fading away
becoming other
 
Needing paint
needing color
 
Pour me
your hue
 
Tarp me
your shade
 
Glaze me
your tint
 
Wash me
your tone
 
Rain me
your bow

© 2009 Trée


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This is one of my favorites Tree. Wash me your tone, rain me your bow, beautiful expression and my words are not doing this justice.


Posted 13 Years Ago
The line:
"Rain me
your bow"
made me smile. I really enjoy your diction and flow, especially with this poem. It's so simple, but the emotion is extremely crisp and vivid. Very refreshing! Thanx for writing.
♥Destiny♥

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on February 21, 2009

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Trée
Trée

Franklin, TN



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When I was in college I was told I should not consider a career in writing. For the next 20 years I wrote nothing. About three years ago, I discovered blogging and fractals. I started posting fractals.. more..