It's not your best piece, there's no denying that, because I've read some of your other pieces, and they're simply magnifiscent.
This piece leaves a lot to be desired in way of details, and much better description, but I really think that you should repost this after it's been edited
I LOVE the way you put an entirely new perspective on stalkers.
I really really wish that you had taken this piece farther...:( I was quite frankly disappointed :( DO IT AGAIN! :D
Judging by your poetry (in general), your little "About" section to the side, and your status, I believe it's quite clear why your "friend" calls you a stalker.
"I'm just a boy looking/for love." Ha. I lol'd. Never have I seen such an excellent example of "creeper". I'll give you a 1/100 for being so amusing.
great write :) i honestly don't get why society misuses and OVER uses the words "creep" and "stalker"...its understandable in a joking tone tho....it just depends what kind of tone she said it in :)
~gabbz
hello. my name is danny. im a weird person. so i write weird poems. and i am bipolar. and that is all you need to know about me. if you really want to ask something, then send me a message. just keep .. more..