The creep

The creep

A Poem by that weird guy
"

My 'friend' called me a stalker, so I decided to write a little poem about it.

"
  How am i a stalker?

  I'm not creeping in your 
  windows.

  I'm not snatching your
  people up.

  How am i weird?

  I'm just a normal kid
  trying to fit in. 

  I'm just a boy looking
  for love.

 How am i 'different'?

  Aren't we all the same?

© 2011 that weird guy


Author's Note

that weird guy
This is baaaaaaaaad but whateverr

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It's not your best piece, there's no denying that, because I've read some of your other pieces, and they're simply magnifiscent.
This piece leaves a lot to be desired in way of details, and much better description, but I really think that you should repost this after it's been edited
I LOVE the way you put an entirely new perspective on stalkers.
I really really wish that you had taken this piece farther...:( I was quite frankly disappointed :( DO IT AGAIN! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


Point made. :) I think we all feel this way. I certainly have.

Posted 14 Years Ago


An everyman poem I can so relate

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this. It's aweosme. greatjob

Posted 14 Years Ago


And the love!! It's the reason for everything!!!
You did good job to bring out the different meaning (or reason???!) of love!!!!
:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Judging by your poetry (in general), your little "About" section to the side, and your status, I believe it's quite clear why your "friend" calls you a stalker.

"I'm just a boy looking/for love." Ha. I lol'd. Never have I seen such an excellent example of "creeper". I'll give you a 1/100 for being so amusing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


great write :) i honestly don't get why society misuses and OVER uses the words "creep" and "stalker"...its understandable in a joking tone tho....it just depends what kind of tone she said it in :)
~gabbz

Posted 14 Years Ago



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hello. my name is danny. im a weird person. so i write weird poems. and i am bipolar. and that is all you need to know about me. if you really want to ask something, then send me a message. just keep .. more..