Arrive

Her mind is a pure blue

Dive deep into a sunset

Riding on the train sleep

Headphones soundtrack

Clock in clock out dream

Have you found the end

On the outside again fly

Now you must wake up

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This poem gives me a train journey . Pure blue and a dive deep sunset give me a very positive feeling. Music and dozing, sounds so relaxing. That fly is an irritant on an otherwise pleasant journey. That’s my take duff. Hope you are well. I enjoyed my visit.

Chris

[duff]

Thank you my friend

[D. Mansfield]

Nice concise poem, I enjoyed it

[duff]

Thank you my friend

[lov]

this is so cinematic! I like who you are describing.
thank you for your words!

[duff]

Cheers. I'm pleased you liked it