Eye Smile

I haven’t posted here in many years. This is something new I’ve been working on. It’s not finished but would love some feedback.

I close my eyes and see your face
Your smile, your eyes, perfect in place

When I think of you, I can’t help but smile
Your beauty, your grace, you’re amazing style

You have opened a secret part of me
Always kept hidden and now you can see

Somehow, you’ve managed to break through my walls
I should be frightened, there’s no fear at all

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[Kane Hagwood]

There are some special people in our lives that tend to open our hearts and minds like that. This makes me think of all the love and loss I've experienced over the years. Some experiences were good. Some were not so good. But I remember this feeling infatuation. Closing my eyes. Thinking of my special person. But, the pages of life continue to turn. I truly hope you have someone in your life that makes you feel this special way.

"You have opened a secret part of me
Always kept hidden and now you can see"

This is a nice part, though stings a little for me. I think about all the secret things I shared with those I considered to be "that special someone", and wish I had a time machine to back up and omit a couple of things. Even just sharing that intimate side of myself to anther person.

Sorry for babbling; this poem just made me reminisce a bit. Nice work with the poem, and I hope you continue to share your passion for poetry :)