night

A Poem by duffin

a poem describing why so many people connect with the night time

night

why cant i be as cold as thee

why cant i be as free

why cant i see the light you see

or be what i can be

why cant i freeze my heart tonight

and sail away to thee

oh nightly shadow so dark so cold

how i long to be with thee.

© 2008 duffin

Author's Note

any crit. is good

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Norah

Very organised and well written!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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duffin

brownwood, TX

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im dustin duffy .... you can call me muffin ... im from the wrong side of the tracks and from two family popular with the police .... and this ... is my life lol more..