falling isnt so bad

love poem for my keira

time stands still within your quake
my heart it flutters ... this must be fake
looking down " but ill get hurt"
whispered words but heard there not
a step we take on to the edge
looking down " no not again "
whispered words but still there fought
looking down we take the leap
falling fast " nows to late"
whiperd words .... they say alo

Reviews

[Keira]

awww i still love this poem!

[Deena Miller]

I like what you're trying to convey, but the spelling and grammar are a bit off...unless that's intentional? Good poem, just straighten out the spelling and grammar if those weren't intentional :)