Damned Humans

Haha people~

Women

Men

And children alike

You used to make me want to die by a spike

My social anxiety would haunt me all day

And I would wish that all you humans would just go away

But no more do I feel that way

The kind words of others

The comfort and love you all give like brother to brother

All have given me strength

Thank you my sweets

You're all such treats

I wish I could meet you all and give you true thanks

There is one person who has (knowingly) read all my stuff

He tends to fill my heart with fluff

So thank you dear

And thank all of you that are here

My depression may come and go

But writing and knowing that people like my nonsense completes me so

So I wish you all the best of days

Farewell all of you sweets~ 

Author's Note

Ugh I felt sweet. Disgusting sweetness...

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"Disgusting sweetness" is always been the true sweetness that oft. comes straight frm d bottom of d heart.. vid s speck of anxiety. Peopl around d world has lost their vibes; society turned 2 anew PALACE for outcasts. Ah....funny it's but sometimes d heart cries watching brutality being wandered xcross d world. And in b/w tht, such people like u dolls get stuck vid d magnetism of disgust whch further & farthe loomed in disgusting sweetness: the sympathy-pit-to-people being lost in wickedness of life. Not a bad imagery! Looking 4ward 2 reading ur work!

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Thank you~ Glad you liked it

[Solar]

I enjoyed the flavour of the poem and what you conveyed in it.

Misanthropy would be a waste - without other humans to spike it, just a thought.

The first stanza was great !

[Alexandra Hounschell]

~Thank you~

[Solar]

You're welcome.

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