the forgotten

Three little words that I couldnt say, I want to go back to days we would play video games all day, when you come over to my house just to say I'm something else, I miss your warm smile that lit up the room,  you came in to my life and turn it up sided down, you changed me from the inside out, three little words that I couldnt spit out when all you could say is please don't let me be the forgotten, you did so much and gave it your all and all you asked was please don't let me be the forgotten but the world couldn't manage that, I keep seeing you looking pale and weak like you had one foot out the door, you looked at me and said those three little words then I watched you flade into the unknown, now i 'm standing at your grave wishing it was a fake, wishing I could take your place, now its to late to say I love you but I will still scream it to the sky hoping it will make it to where every you are

just so you know I loved you more

Author's Note

Jake: gives flowers to jane

Jane: I'm not going anywhere hun don't worry

Jenny: MARRY HER!!!!!

Jake: *blush* j-jane you want to go out

Jane: *hugs* silly we already are

Reviews

[Steph]

I really like this! It's quite poignant and heartfelt. I feel maybe if you layed it out more like a poem, I would find it much easier to read and the use of the rhyme you added to some would be much more effective, but that's just my personal preference. A good job overall.

[the happy pickle]

Thanks ^_^ I am going to rewrite all my works when I am done.