Jurassic Park: A Haiku

This is a short poem I wrote several years ago, sitting on my living room floor sleep-deprived and watching Jurassic Park.

Velociraptors...
It hurts when they bite your leg.
Ouch! One just bit me.

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

Hah, very interesting

[zdzd]

I loved "The Lost World", good work!

[[KL]]

A good piece inspired by a movie.. Haiku isn't normally my thing, but this is pretty interesting.. Made me laugh.. :L Good work here, keep it up. (:

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

Lmfao!!