Clean Slate

A poem about clean slates, new chances and change.

We all want a clean slate
A new chance, a new day

A chance we use to change
To avoid unnecessary pain

But when the clean slate clouds up
Our new found hope is brought to a halt
We think that we are not meant to change
It is not in our power, not in our range

But if the change is worth the fight

Then try and try with all your might
And if the change still refuses to occur
The change will be the one you prefer

In truth, we change every day
More than we ever see or can say
This is small and slow a change
So be patient and kind with your clean slate

Author's Note

Please, just give any advice or opinions. I don't mind harsh people, I just want to improve =D

Reviews

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~ i agree... beautifully written and conveyed... very perceptive poetry...

[Admiral Kirk]

I don't really think this needs improvement. It's pretty good. :P I like how sometimes it rhymes, but sometimes it doesn't. It gives the poem a free feeling, like when it comes to writing, you know no boundaries. Awesome work. :D