No Gud or Bad, Rong or Rite

A poem about people judging others, not wanting to hear their thoughts and opinions.

i is riting poetry
i is tryin to rime
bu dis is no wurking
cuz i cant fined wurds to desrkiibe

i cant talked bout heart of mine
or thots okkurin in my miind
it huurts to muchh to sher
wif a straynger wo dusnt care

i no my writing is bad
an feelin of disproval maked me sad
dis are mine, my feelins i riite
thers no gud or bad, rong or rite

Reviews

[gabrielle]

i truly like this. others have their standards on what a poetry should be. and i could not agree more that there is no good or bad write, wrong or write in terms of writing our feelings. so endearing. good work.