Time (written in 60 seconds)

I wrote this in 60 seconds for the 60 second contest

Time is endlessly ticking
And it never is quite enough
To finish all the things you want to
Everything in life just seems so tough

Deadlines and D-days
Always on your calender
Events and judgements you face
If only we can stop this

Time ends
Poem ends
Life ends
Trying ends

Just give one more chance, please?

Reviews

[Joan*Eckhart]

I can't believe you wrote this in sixty seconds! It's so good. Again, the honesty is spot on.

[The Nameless]

Thanks! =D