Let me cry......

Tale of troubled times.

At times when i am sad,
When the days have been bad,
My smile too when seems heavy,
And my soul looks shabby,
Its then when i want to cry,
Shout out loud, punch the walls and cry.
But something, i know not what stops me,
It holds back tears, but does not pity me,
I try to move on and forget,
but harder that i try, the harder does it get,
Its then in dilemma of which way to go, i want to
cry,
This time though in sobs, under supressed muffled
voice, cry.
Still but never a drop rolls,
My eyes fill, but no drop falls,
Then i stop, push my pain aside and try to smile,
Tears and sadness follow, accompany,
And i set my foot towards the next mile.....!!!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i relate to this...cry during movies, but in real life...it seems the tears just don't come...maybe life, maybe already shed too many tears...maybe the emotion stays pent up...

lots of emotion in this...or lots of pent up emotion would be more apt.

jacob

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for this insightful review and this kind visit sir. It means a lot!

[Kousika]

Lot of emotions i can see da in this.. You know the feel that you wrote has a life..
It occurs in everybody's life.. Few say and some don't..
Congrats.. Awesome again..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you so much...........so glad you liked it so much!!! :) :)

[Leena Madhuri]

Awwwwww loved it... you use beautiful words and i like the way you are expressing your feelings! thats great!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much............you really went for the oldest ones!!! God is so kind..........:) :)

[Richa Verma]

i can relate to this.You have described it so beautifully. Great work.:)

[Karen]

I too have experienced the desire to unburden in tears and have been unable to, particularly when I'm haunted by sins that should make me cry but don't. I too don't know why I cannot cry, why though the desire is there, the need, the desperation, I cannot cry. This poem is so poignant and heartfelt, I'm moved by your words. Beautifully written!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Karen......that is excatly the situation that inspired me to write this poem......and thank you again for your kind words.....really means a lot!

[MsJewel]

You have shared a wonderful message in your well written poem my friend. There is sadness here, but there is hope too - "I set my foot towards the next mile" -
Great writing. I enjoyed this one very much.

:) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

This time though in sobs, under supressed muffled
voice, cry.
Still but never a drop rolls,
My eyes fill, but no drop falls,

[Hailey Shay]

This really resonates within me, I can relate. thank you for painting the perfect picture of suppressing true emotions. Great work.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow! I am glad that you could relate.....thank you so much for this wonderful review!

[Scott Metro]

Somber...telling...revealing....will we ever stop the crumbling...I think not...but perhaps writing these insights is how the gods wanted us to deal with it...
Enjoyed your torment my friend.

Scott

[Pushkar Prabhat]

I agree with you sir and thank you for this kind review!

[Penny]

Its beyond imagination how much this poem looks like it was written by me. Very toyching, & in my opinion a poem is better if its closer to my heart. So.....
I think I said it all.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow! I am so glad you liked it that much! My purpose is fulfilled.......thank you so much :-):-)

[Penny]

Ue welcum. & it has totally been my pleasure.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

........:-) :-)