Disappointment

.......and just when i thought,
The moment was mine.
It escaped from my hands,
Like the sands of time........!

Reviews

[MsJewel]

A very clever little gem!

:) Julie

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

oh the vivid work graces your mind!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for your delightful review!

[Karen]

Ah, when moments slip past our fingers and are lost forever, it's the worst feeling of loss and disappointment as if the moment had been ripped from our very souls and stolen for all eternity... or maybe I'm just being dramatic! Haha.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Not at all......you are absolutely correct! Thank you so much for your insightful review!

[Rehan Roy]

These lines can be deconstructed , each time one reads. Splendid!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for your kind review!

[Miss Kerri]

I like this because we all experience a moment like this at some point in our lives or, unfortunately, many times in our lives.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you......but can't say i am glad you could relate......may you never miss any opportunity!:)

[Scott Metro]

Missed opportunities...watch for what you want...don't let it sneak up on you...or like you say...sands of time.
Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Sir. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love this dear poet. It says so much in few words. We have those disappointments indeed in the fleeting moments of time...Bravo

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks you so very much Sami......i am delighted by your wonderful review!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is reality.Moments are but fleeting.We have to grab hold of them with both hands,A wise piece my friend:P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a bunch:) your reviews are always encouraging!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and I am glad if my words help you:P

[Penny]

Phenomenol. Its gr8 to see how took the age old metaphor, & transformed it to something novel and elegant. Very well done.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.......you are very kind! :)

[Richa Verma]

short... simple... but thoughtful...m lovin it!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much dear:):)