Masterpiece Of Lust

Come,
Love,
be my canvas, tonight.
Let me paint you bliss........

With deft strokes of passion;
From palette of desires,
Let me blend some hues,
With tones of fantasies.......
With love being the accent,
Lust as the binder........

Come,
Love,
Be my canvas,
Let us paint a masterpiece!

Author's Note

I have tried something new. Please point out my mistakes and give me you suggestions. Also do tell me if i did succeed.

Reviews

[SUGATA M]

nice and well captured. good work.

[Rehan Roy]

'With deft strokes of passion'....You have given the beauty, an expression, with an art. An impassioned write.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Rehan for you kind and insightful review!!! :):)

[Penny]

A very nyc and lustful picture you hv painted there. Well done.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot penny for this wonderful review.......:):):)

[Penny]

Ur welcum.

[Scott Metro]

This is great...so simple...woven so well...saying it all.
A treasure of words.
Admiration.

Scott

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you Sir. I am humbled by your compliments. It means a lot!

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott............

[MsJewel]

Soft and sensual, you are a painter with words. Stunning my friend!

:) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Julie. I delighted to hear this from you!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well hello Pushkar,You have certainly succeeded .This is sweet and nice:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Hello vidya.....thank you very much.......so glad you liked it!!! :):):)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome my friend and I did:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

....:):)....

[Sami Khalil]

A poem of painted lust...Bravo.......................

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so very much sami........! :):)

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...Any time...:)...........

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:):).......

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)>.............

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Poetry is a portrait of words and you painted them beautifully :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for this kind visit and generous review.......! :):)