Departure Blues

====Departure Blues====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 2014

 

from WORLD transit,

i will depart, too.

i fear not:

Destiny!

 

My absence,

              Shall wither, the saplings of wisdom.....

              Shall no more protect, my thoughts written on the sands.....

 

That:

i Fear!

 

 

Abandoned houses, empty rooms,

Hardly my worry!

 

i hope the ideas and principles i petted,

Shall find new homes.

 

The fantasies and achievements, i dreamt,

Shall find new dreamers.

 

And my deepest of the deep desires,

See the light of the day.

 

 

 

BUT

 

i have no seed to sow,

i am still fighting the waves to get ashore....

 

my rented room prays of solace

my ideas and principles bring me disgrace.....

 

my dreams are nothing; just achievement fantasies.

My desires reside deep into defamed alleys....

 

HOW???? HOW???? HOW???

i worry, i fear.

 

My train: On time!

 

 

 

Breathe.....

Deep...............

Deeper....................

Release!

 

 

CHANGE:

Avaracadabra!!!

Reviews

[Shashi Prakash]

Great! love your poetic skill

[Pushkar Prabhat]

arreee sirji.........thank you thank you!!!

[Sreenath]

well posture of emotion maintained through out the poem.. the fear and anxiety messing around in life and dreaming about the best to come on new phase of life... a well written poem .enjoyed reading it .. keep smiling :)

[misha]

Great write! I love how the font and colors changed. It played into the theme of your poem very well.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a bunch!!! Happy new year!!! :)

[Tshogyal Moktan]

ah! this is something very pro....I liked the mixture of words and the fonts...this poetry took me to an extreme level...I liked it very much...awesome work...hats off...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow!!! such passionate response!!!! thank you so much.........!!!! :) :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Changes are necessary sometimes, life itself is a change,
I like the way you expressed your feelings here, and I like the structure of this poem,
nicely done,
thankyou

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much.................. :) :)

[AprilRN1210]

change is hard.. leaving something behind to start something else can be a scary time.. the dreams you once had, the things you once believed, will you still have them?.. will that change too?... wondering if the path you now choose is the right one for you.. will it turn out the same as the last one did.. all the questions.. doubts.. fears.. this is one I am sure a lot can relate to on deeper levels..well done as usual my friend..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow you added a whole lot more meaning to this one..............thank you so much............it really means a lot!!! :) :)

[AprilRN1210]

always a pleasure, you're welcome.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear poet... Yes... your dreams will carry on
in the people who knew you on this earth.
read moredear poet... Yes... your dreams will carry on
in the people who knew you on this earth.
We are all like flowers that flourish year after
year, but even perennials will return to the earth...
leaving their beauty in the eyes of the beholder.
Amen... bless you. May your journey be bright
with the light along the way. truly... Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

We are like flowers that return every year...
and then we return to the earth. truly... Pat

[Eleanor]

The way the font and its colour changes, is really interesting.
The writing is so honest and has so much depth into it. Thought provoking and great to read.
You again did such a great job.
Thank you :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you ma'am!!! so glad you liked it!!! :) :)

[Eleanor]

Ma'am? You are so much better than me at writing. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i am not better than none..............don't mind the ma'am......just was in a fun mood!!! :) :)

[Sindu]

Hits deep my friend! So true; true fear. Similar fear plagues my mind. I just fear time will consume all before I get to play my part, achieve, be bigger. It's brilliant how you encompassed all into this, hope, fear, dreams, dejection. It does seem like magic. But magic is just a trick, an illusion.

my dreams are nothing; just achievement fantasies.

Let's hope that is not how we will feel tommorow.
Interesting words play. As always. Short and striking hard. Fonts and colour add to the mix.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow............thank you for such passionate review!!! So glad that you liked it so much!!!! :) :)

[Sindu]

I do. I do love it. It's more than deserving. You're welcome.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well thanks again..............:) :)

[micky]

I feel the fear that this will be my life as a writer when I am an adult.... it sucks :/ But I do how ever really love this piece well done!!!!!!!! Definitely my new favorite :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well..............fear spares none, just the stupid. i really appreciate you kind words.......thanks a lot Micky!! :) :)

[R Smith]

interesting poem with many different sides to it, i like the use of colour and font sizes to emphasize your intent and passion also the Avaracadabra at the end provides a mind stretching twist, excellent work :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so very much sir..............it means a lot!!!! so glad you enjoyed!!! :) :)