Contest With The Sun

====Contest With The Sun====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 19/11/2014

 

Abused, wounded......

Scared and bled;

i am sore from the night.

i have survived some breaths..............

 

i am marked, crimson;

By my fate;

Targeted by these beams........

 i am cracking at the dawn!

 

Obstinacy: Survival.

Agenda: to remain.

Eyes locked with the sun,

Blindness: Opulence!

 

Overhead and strong:

Frailty set ablaze........

In warmth of the past,

i am melting in the pain.

 

Let it scorch, burn me to ashes.

For i am not counting

On the night to heal;

That’s just another devil, to deal.

 

i will keep my pride,

For my principles shall prevail;

Till dusk is all the time,.......

then, this sun is going down in Flames!

Reviews

[Rounak Jain]

so aggressive, so powerful ,outrageous. thinking of sun as bringing upon such agony , never thought that way earlier.

[Penny]

When you have lived a life in darkness, the light the sun sure does scorch and burn you but again you have your own fire which keeps you fighting while sets in the last. Beautiful piece.

[Misha]

Beautiful work with powerful words.

[MsJewel]

Wow! Powerful words, so very well written!

:) Julie

[Gurleen Saluja]

A beautifully penned write. Loved it.

Thanks for sharing. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome................and thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You too are welcome :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

!!!!!!!!!! :) :)

[Sanjh]

It's beautiful Bro. I loved the last verse. Wonderful selection of words...
thank you for sharing...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! and thank you..............:) :)

[Sreenath]

I dont know why I feel that I have read this somewhere????

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i guess........just before writing this review, HERE!!! :p
do tell if you find this somewhere else!!!!
:)

[Sreenath]

i dont remember exactly yar... may be its some kind of instincts lol superb write really enjoyed reading it

[Pushkar Prabhat]

no it might be.........not exact words......but yes i could have been inspired........bloody subconscious.......
thank you.......so glad you enjoyed!!! :) :)

[Sreenath]

yeah its awesome

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks again........!!!! :) :)

[micky]

This is certainly your best yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I LOVE it :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow!!!! i didn't think this was that good :p
thank you so much Micky!!! :) :)

[Briana O'Connor]

I love the unique, dark quality here. The battle is invigorating and fresh. Nice write.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you Briana............it means a lot!!!! :) :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very well, I like its tone and structure, well crafted,
some lines are beautiful and touchy,
Thankyou for sharing :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thanks to you for liking and appreciating............:) :)