Claustrophobic Ambitions

My dreams are afraid of closed spaces.

Claustrophobic   Ambitions

copyright@pushkar prabhat 29/12/2014

i

tiny self

~Acknowledge~

unimportant as i may,

i know! i know i am, was, will; be nothing.

but nothing is not what i want

'anything' can not satisfy

demands i have none

just desire:

fairplay.

i

appreciate

resistance like challenges.

favouritism doesn't cause me to spill,

but an active conspiracy deserves my wrath;

deserves every man, an opportunity, O fate!

don't limit me to one room, same walls.

untie me, stop,

remove this

blindfold.

i

can hear,

these walls closing,

stop, stop, make it stop; don't crush my

Claustrophobic Ambitions

for my dreams are big, huge, GRAND!

don't squeeze them in the corner

of immediate necessities;

of worldly duties;

Stop!

i

warn, though,

insatiable lust this,

knows nothing about proportions.

potential is the motto & persistence a strategy

resilience is my revolution.

all force shall amplify

i beseech thee

O fate,

Stop!

i

humble being,

~Acknowledge~

but you don't know my dreams,

fear shall only feed their survival instincts.

let the doors flung open; let breathe.

Stop! Stop don't crush my 

precious, rebellious

claustrophobic

ambitions.

Reviews

[Mavericks]

Loved the Theme. Creativity at it's Best. And, I Respect your Urge for Freedom. Being Yourself is the Best thing one can do for himself, for Each Soul has it's own Life Path. Opinion's of other's are like Onion's. Nothing Else really Matter's. Remind me of that Song. It's my Life =)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot kind poet............really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Mavericks]

...........................:) :)

[MomzillaNC]

The layout is like a audio signal readout of a heartbeat. The entire poem has a driving heart-pounding, almost desperate feel to it.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Momzi. I have tried to show the desperation. Your comments assure me of success. :):)

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very nicely done, here the structure and vocabulary are very attractive,, and you conveyed your wishes in a brilliant way, good job

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot!!! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Amazing! Loved it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Amazing! Loved it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot!!! ;) :)

[Confuser]

You are brilliant, Bravo, in my library, you always make me think and wonder, just amazing writer, I truly hope you know. The time you spend shows, the thoughts are always righteous and thoughts flow easily and through always an adventure I go of humanity and life, the message is fabulous and there are always the suppressive people that shut the doors and close us in; we must fight them not to let us fly as the free spirits we are meant to be. Again, you have challenged me to write better. For now a savor in another delightful poem of Pushkar Prabhat, the author standing tall among men!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

OMG!!! This much praise is making me nervous! Thank you so much for always going on an adventure with me!!! You are an awesome poetess and i hope my future poems too delight you like this. It means a lot!!
:) :)

[Confuser]

For goodness sake, don't get nervous, it is just beautiful. My husband gets bored with me saying "you will not believe the talent." I loved this poem. You are a great writer. Keep writing!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much. You are awesome!!! :)

[Confuser]

How silly, I just loved the poem; you are a great writer. Something about it touched me; don't worry, no one going to call you to appear as the Poet Laureate sp of the world, but ya never know.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

It is good to know that!! :p

[Confuser]

...............................Dale

[ayesha gupta]

great piece of art. ..and rightly tittled. i enjoyed it. this was liked you open up your caged thoughts with us.
thanks for sharing.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you for reading and appreciating. So Glad you enjoyed!!! :):)