....a hint of YOU!

====a hint of you====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 25-02-15

 

Running....

                desperately

            turning,

                twisting,

                    striding,

                        reaching,

                                                                                     to grab onto,

                                                               a hint of you.

Chasing after.......

                                            wind,

                    smoke,

                       spirit,

                          shadow,

                                illusion........???

No, i know you are real.

 

i have, held you in my arms....

       kissed your blessed forehead,

                                   your lively cheeks,

                                                your warm lips.

i know, you are living.

 

i have discovered life from you.....

       been calmed under your breath,

                                      healed on your lap,

                                             awakened by your love.

No, this can’t be a mere mirage

or some game mind plays.

No.   Oh....

Yes here,

                i feel your palms......

                fingers......

No. No Stop.

Stop, don’t go.

Here i pull you......stay,

            submit to my arms’ will.

i can almost feel my heart warm up to race,

delighted at this familiar embrace.....Nooooo.

Wait!!

Poof!!!!

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Again a surreal poem! But the portrayal is so vivid for once the reader can see your anguished chase..
"Chasing after..wind, smoke, spirit, shadow, illusion........???
No, i know you are real."
Left me wanting for more.
Loved it!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so so much...............really means a lot!!! :) :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are Welcome!

[Brittany Zedalis]

This gets right up in the readers face and forces them to pay attention. Brilliant writing.

[Ruth]

Ohh, interesting...visitation or flesh..not sure but wow...speechless, took my breath away :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well mission accomplished then........!!!! haha
thank you so much..........glad you enjoyed!!! :) :)

[Shubham Joshi]

well the poem is really saying something...
it's a great web of words

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you dear poet.............!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

it was fantastic, awsm, grt , outstanding etc SIR

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Harpreet............!!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

welcome SIR

[Leena Madhuri]

Superb! :) Love it!!! keep writing :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much!!!! :) :)

[Leena Madhuri]

(y) :) your welcome dear :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:) :) :) :).....................

[Leena Madhuri]

:) :) waiting for your new poems :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

there is a new born.......popped just yesterday!!! old ones are needy too......you know!! :)

[Leena Madhuri]

yes! sure i would read all of them :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! i will be so lucky....... ;D

[~]

ohhh.. anticipation that ends like this? .. it leaves you hungry for more.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yes it does :D................thank you so much....................!!!! :) :)

[nazia]

What I liked most is the way you executed the entire idea of this imaginary love lady of yours... Great write :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much...............!!!! :) :)

[Jamestown]

Wow! I enjoyed reading this and it is extremely creative!
Fantasy and reality really cool idea! Love the format, thanks for
sharing and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Sir...............so very glad you liked it so much...........!!!! :) :)

[Lydia Shutter]

A fantasy or reality? Who can tell? The urgency is emphasized with your font changes. Very effective. A dream can vanish into thin air....reality will stay. I liked this. Lydi*

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much........so glad you liked it.......!!!! :) :)