Sculpted Tears

===Sculpted Tears===

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 12-03-15

 

Sculpture of ice,

Huh....just frozen tears;

Though, don’t leak, from eyes,

        Neither flow.......

 

i brittle, sustain:

love.......longings.........pain.

Your, sweetheart.........tears, thaw.

My lonesome..........solitude, warm.

Our, dear..........memories, heat.

i don’t cry, just sweat and bleed........

 

i cold, restrain:

love.......longings.........pain.

But,

In routine,

Unsuspected........unseen.

 

Butterfly belly & my heart,

Play catch and run.

Caught amidst,

My longings ignite, burn.

 

Polaroid draws, emotions sway,

i give in to the kiss, and just melt away........

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

love, longing, pain....
I loved the words... especially those lines of tears, solitude and memories. Although, I haven't ever told you something related to this in my life, but it is much relatable for me...
You may have written out of imagination but unintentionally, you wrote the words of my heart... thank u my friend....
Thanks a lot!!!
Ani : )

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot Ani............glad you liked it!!! :) :)

[~]

I - and my eyes :)- really liked this poem. The powerful imagery flourishes through the colors and font.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much.........!!!!
i is intentional in all my 'poems' and i am considering my eyes.............
thank you again..............really appreciate it...........:) :)

[~]

is it the all seeing I? ;)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:):):):):):)...............it is a bad habit that just somehow seems right.

[~]

ahhh clever you :):)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well......thank you!!! :D :D

[Gurleen Saluja]

A heart-melting write.
Well written and expressed.
And a different one again!
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you so much.........!!! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

my fav line was 'i don't cry, just sweat and bleed'
great work... intense and thoughful... well done mate!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much........!!! :) :)

[Jamestown]

Emotions flowing like a clear brook, I really enjoyed this piece and the
format is terrific, very creative! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much...............!!!! really appreciate your kindness........... :) :)

[Jamestown]

You are welcome, keep up the good work!

[Sindu]

Some intense emotions, pain and longing! That was dripping with all of those. It's like a rocky ride home in a snowstorm, trying to find the path and stay on it.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much dear poet!!! your reviews always sound better than my poems...........i am honored!!!:) :)

[Sindu]

You're welcome dear poet! I only try to make sense of what you wrote and the way I connect :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i really appreciate that!!!! thank you again!! :) :)

[R Smith]

amazing writing Pushkar, you draw many pictures with your words and its quite a ride all the way, bravo :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Sir........ :) :)