Paper, Pencils and Your Memories

====Paper, Pencils and Your Memories====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 25-03-15

 

Fuelled by your memories:

    The darkness in my pencils.......

          Fought all night, with the white paper.

 

With each stroke,

        i undid the knots

          On the piles of emotions and feelings.

     i broke the spell

          On the spells of longings and despair.

 

Hand and fingers guided by my heart.......

        i traced,

           the sparkle in your eyes.....

               the soft liveliness of your cheeks......

                   the luscious invitations of your lips.....

                         the enchanting glory of your hair.....

 

And,

 

Now,

     This picture.....

          Pretends to be you.....

                   Teases my love,

                        Taunts my loneliness,

                             Punishes my desires,

And leaves me broken,

                                        open,

                                                and burning........

 

Till eternity......

 

Far an embrace of you.....!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have known the places in the poetry.
"The darkness in my pencils.......
Fought all night, with the white paper."
I had dark taverns, darkness and pencil and paper as my only friends. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Sir for this beautiful review...........really means a lot!!! :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Jamestown]

Fantastic piece top to bottom and again great format! Word choice is excellent
and those words pulled the heart strings:) keep up the good work!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Sir.........!!!! :) :)

[Rounak Jain]

this got the best of my heart .. felt the words hitting me right inside, Thawing the frozen part.... beautiful this one,.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

So glad you felt this way................thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

Pushkar: Just fabulous writing once again....I loved every single words...your imagination is marvelous....
My favorite lines:
With each stroke,
i undid the knots
On the piles of emotions and feelings.
i broke the spell
On the spells of longings and despair.
However, the whole poem was brilliant!!! Thank you dear friend....Dale

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you so much Dale for the lovely review........always a pleasure........!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

You are a very talented writer!!! Take care and thank you so much....Dale

[Gurleen Saluja]

Beautiful and splendid again
I'd like to suggest to change hairs to hair as plural of hair remains intact.
Thanks for sharing. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much.........great suggestion!!!
:) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome