Lost Steps

====Lost Steps====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 31-03-15

 

Lost in;

Fog of opinions,

          With compromised vision,

          And disrupted breathing.......

 

Here nowhere,

On the edge of this line:

          An imaginary boundary,

          Between imaginations.

 

i have to maintain a stand,

Against this crosswind

        Of conscience and morals

 

i have to walk along....

          straight and strong.

 

i feel sand

Beneath my feet.

It is here,

i want to belong.

 

Across is not unknown

Unfair it is wet cement,

An inch a step apart

Forever to lament......

 

Unfair this side

Washed by waves,

No step however strong,

 Stays for long......

 

i stumble, fumble....

But keep on....

 

And when the sun rises,

Shinning judgements all over....

Looking back all you see.....

Are some erroneous steps

Frozen in time.....

Reviews

[Ashwin Thakur]

Light when concentrated becomes a single ray of light which burns everything
That same light when letted free on a sunny rainy day creates a beautiful rainbow
Its the same light but why they have two personas
Its your light in the path of your destiny
You decide if you have to burn down your path to destiny or spread rainbows
Surely great poem brother i didnt expected any thing less from you:):):)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! beautiful review.............thank you so so much for your generous words.........really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

you are great sir . it is realy fantastic .

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Mam........i really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

pls pls pls dont call me mam

[Pushkar Prabhat]

okay okay......sorry if i offended you.....did not mean to.......

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

dont say sorry sir . u have not offended me .

[Pushkar Prabhat]

that is good to hear........have a great night!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

same to u SIR

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:) :) :) :)............

[Lydia Shutter]

We all want to belong, but sometimes that means changing our ideals and our thoughts. This is not always a good thing. A write of empowerment and introspection. Well written. I liked the change of fonts and margins. Lydi**

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much........so glad you liked it!!! :) :)

[MOON]

Beautifully conveyed , life is full of pitfalls.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much!!!! :) :)

[Deepika]

One of the most creative writer! Great work (y)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much!!!! :) :)

[Sarah naiding]

Awsme thx for sharing ...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much..........:) :)

[Sami Khalil]

Those who stumble and fumble but keep moving on and learn from their mistakes will become wiser and stronger. A very wise and powerful message...:)......

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well said.......thank you so much Sami!!!! :) :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[~]

A wonderful work. There are metaphors with each line, reminding the reader of the one thought beating like a drum - this writer is committed to stand hiss ground.
Loved it Pushkar!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.........!!! so glad you loved it!!! :D :) :)

[~]

you are welcome :):)

[nazia]

This is Brilliant Pushkar. A very creative and unique write. There might be erroneous steps but those steps make us wiser.... Nicely penned dear friend :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well said........!! thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Ana B.]

wow, i'm officially a fan of yours, stunning, brilliant, magical write!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

OMG!!! WoW!!! you made my day..............thank you so much..............it means a lot!!!! thank you again kind poetess!!! :) :)

[R Smith]

another artistic layout Pushkar that encapsulates a remarkable poem which is going into my library, exceptional work my friend :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! such an honor Sir...........thank you so much..........you always inspire me to write better.......!!! :) :)