words and words

words and words

A Poem by Shannon
"

just trying something new ^_^ tell me what you think

"

words

           words

                       and more words

      all i can offer is words

                                just words

lies

      lies

                and more lies

                                all i hear are lies

                just lies

facades

          facades

                      and more facades

           all you show is your facade

           just a facade

never

        never

                   never a strong enough word

never

          never

                   never a convincing lie

never

      never

               never a strong enough facade

 

Now stop your lies

and drop the facade

as i weave a story of my words

that speaks to your heart

identafies the lies

and sees past the facade

and shows you what it means to be happy....

© 2009 Shannon


Author's Note

Shannon
hahaha ummmm...... trying somethign new.

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Did you change this? seems different from before or maybe I just like it better this time.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I liked it, actually expected a little more. Great buildup, then it
..........ends

Posted 15 Years Ago


isn't the word formatty stuff fun?!?!?!/?
nice job i liked it lots ♥

Posted 16 Years Ago



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I joined this site in 2009, when I was writing poetry exclusively. However my range has expanded and blended. My once short poems are now some sort of descriptive paragraph/free verse hybrid. I .. more..