Ode To fire

another creative writing assignment.

Oh twirling dance of faery light,
Oh flaming tongues so vividly bright,
Your warm presence
And painful touch
Your deadly essence,
With danger and such,
Oh deadly beast, by the names fire and flame
Should you get loose, tis i to blame,
Your stunning elegance, holds me in a trance
As you dart about, lost in your dance
Oh wondrous predator of speed and grace,
Spread your devious beauty, throughout with haste.

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

Fire is a beautiful beast. Twirling and dancing from fuel through air. This is a beauty you have done very well in capturing here. You words weave an uneven rhythm, while still maintaining a beautiful flow - much like the joyful crackling of flames in a hearth. A very well written piece overall.

[Wicahpi]

Should the first line be 'faery' or fiery ?
Creative writing assignment accomplished.
Well done!

[Senseless whatever]

The piece flows like the fire it is about. Giving it the 'life' it sometimes seems to have. Outstanding

[Jonathan *break away*]

i love fire.... not in a pyro why but its a beautiful thing made by god