Drunken songs

Bottoms up
knock it back
make up
For the life you lack
Shut your eyes
Close 'em tight
Last good byes
In the dead of night

To a girl you dont know
Even though it don't feel right
Whiskey thoughts
Running swift
Words caught
Without a drift

And drunken songs
Screamed at the wall
Makes you wonder
Why you drink at all

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. powerful start sets a certain mindset for the reader. Followed by that uncertain blurry scene. For some however there is no wondering. Great job!

[Brandon]

this has a very good rythem i could actually see this becoming a song great work keep it up


100/100