Path Taken

An expanded and edited version of my poetic review of, Icelandicblue's poem, "The Road That Led To The Field". http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/icelandicblue/1428556/

Hmm.

Find myself
At a lost of words
To express my feelings.

Whether

It be written

Or orally.

Except
I'm pondering
What you have wrote.

And how

It will apply
To my life.

Wondering

If I had zigged

Instead of 

Zagging.

Would that road

Have taken me

To another pathway

From the current one

I'm walking.

 

Possibly

Leading me

Back to home

Sooner.

Reviews

[ManasaC]

this is really nice.. Always in a quandary to choose the path...i can relate this to myself....Loved it:-)

[therisa]

Thank you, ManasaC. Hopefully, you'll find the one, which leads, to an enlighten soul.

[ManasaC]

ya i hope i do :-)

[MomzillaNC]

We are all our own journeys. The choices we make determine the paths we walk.

[therisa]

Have you ever wonder, Momzilla, if you had made a different decision, how your life would be, today?

[MomzillaNC]

I used to. Then, I had a moment of absolute clarity, a moment when I just KNEW that I'd never change one millisecond of my past because I wouldn't risk missing out on one millisecond of my now.

[therisa]

There are moments, which I wished I had acted differently, changing everything, from that moment onwards. But, I also know, crying about it, won't change it. Need to accept it, and move on.

[MomzillaNC]

I pray you come to a point of peace where you no longer dwell on those "what ifs"

[therisa]

Am type of person, who gnaws everything to death, trying to understand every angle, Momzilla.

[MomzillaNC]

I used to be the same way. Finding true peace and joy changes everything.

[therisa]

Even, as a kid, I have been like this, before the crap, hit the fan.

[MomzillaNC]

Me too. . .