And With This Magical Device

An expanded and edited version, of my poetic response to, Anto's poem, "My Tater Peeler". http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/antomac1001/1462378/

Oh
I know
The perfect spot
To start peelin'
Upon my body.

Just trimmin'
What Nature has
Deposited
In err.

Shedding off

The excess weight

Accumulated

Over the years.

Thus removing

A spare tyre

Or two.

Which has

Mysterious grown

Around me.

Digging out

The unwanted

Exterior plumbing

Of mine.

Until only

Interior access

Remains.

Just think

All the money

Your wonderful peeler

Will save.

With

Just a few applications

To one's body

Like mine.

Reviews

[ANTO]

This is a belter ! lol - spare tyres mysteriously appearing and the old plumbing removing - class !
Great craic again !! yay!
:D

[therisa]

Anto, you deserve full credit for this poem, as your original poem inspired this.

[ANTO]

I dont care about that Therisa - its a throwaway thingy - you have it - my gift !!
:)

[therisa]

Thank you, very much, Anto, for your generosity.

[Matching Socks]

This made me chuckle. :)
If I had one of these I wouldn't need to exercise!
well done Therisa

[therisa]

Thank you, Ana. Just think, an entire industry would go broke, if such a device existed.