Obstruction

Obstruction

 

I am too honest.

But I don’t want to you tell lies.

I want a clear start with you.

I only do not see that I am the one pushing you away by telling the truth.

But lying makes it worse right?

Lies destroy things.

 Our thing.

 

My honesty is an obstruction.

Which will tear us apart some day.

I guess it already does.

 

I want to change for you.

But I don’t want to change myself.

Because it is hard to find yourself in this great big world of judgmental fools.

 

I think I found a spark of us.

But I am still searching and looking.

 And every time I see you

The spark ignites.

 

It took me a long time to get faith in love or people.

But you give me hope.

Hope that everything is going to be fine.

 

Because at this moment I am not.

 

 

 

Author's Note

grammar mistakes and feedback are always helping me
so feel free to react , i just want to learn and improve my writing and my english

Reviews

[ANTO]

I didnt see any mistakes.
I like the forthrightedness of your writing and the simple but meaningful style too.

This is the only line that I stumbled at and perhaps thought could have been better written/conveyed.
"I only do not see that I am the one pushing you away by telling the truth."

Honesty as an obstruction is a very interesting topic, I feel.
I liked this one.

[guy drori]

Wow this is pretty amazing. I can really relate. I could tell that she is torn, and that no matter which way she chooses it will not be positive. "I only do not see that I am the one pushing you away by telling the truth. But lying makes it worse right?
Also liked the form of the poem. Gives it a special touch.

[Ashwin Thakur]

Great poem
Wanna see more poems like this
Awesome write.