Stupid things

Stupid things

 

I know I do them

Stupid things

I know

 

But can you blame me?

I am just human.

But you still agree.

Do you remember when it al began?

 

I know I do them

Stupid things

I know

 

Maybe because I am afraid to get hurt

(Again)

Pain is just an emotion right?

Maybe this rings my inner alert.

I wish I could turn of the switch without hesitation.

But would that be a solution for this?

Or am I just craving total isolation?

 

I know I do them

Stupid things

I know

 

 I know that those stupid things define me.

 And that is all you will ever see.

 

I know I do them

Stupid things

 I know

But it’s not just me

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

please if you see mistakes let me know , i just want to improve my writing and my english

and i would love to hear your opinion or feedback !

Reviews

[Robert]

Don't we all do stupid things, but I think we do more good things than stupid things. A very interesting topic to write. But I must say stupid things do not define us unless you let them.

[Cameron]

Simple and straightforward, but all the more stronger for it. A few missing letters in a few words, but written well nonetheless. Nice job miss.

[D.T.]

Great! I really like this one.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Amazing work Dear, this is Lyrics, right? Amazing!

[ANTO]

Theres a typo in L7 - 'al' should be 'all'?
But the introspection here is very readable as the layout lends itself to such a train of thought, I feel.
The imagery is very good - the inner alert button (like the modern ubiquitous smoke alarms) may be turned off but to what end - to get burnt ??
I liked the depth here and I'll read more of your work based on this experience.
Well done.

[theshygirl]

Thank you so much thanks for noticing the typo
With the inner alert i meant that we all have a sort of alert which will ring at the moment when we are about to do something dangerous or that something painfull will happen to you , a sort of warning
With the "switch" i meant ' that we all choice to "feel" emotions , such as pain.
So it is your choice if you want to feel pain/emotion. But when you switch of the button its not only pain that will disappear... So it is humane to feel because we all do ,
And somethimes you just wish you could turn of that switch to escape for example pain

Thank you so much for this feed back :)

[ANTO]

I see. You're welcome.