A New Day

With every new day there is a new beginning......

With every dawn I begin a new day ....

And when the sun sets my time ends...

It's like being alive when the sun rises......

And being dead when it sets......

But in the mean time I am among living dead....

Like the ghost rider who sells his soul to do the devils dirty works...

I have sold my soul....

Whether to the devil....

Or the man that signs my paychecks...

In the end I know my time is up...

And to begin a new day is like making a deal wit the devil....

As he pulls my strings.....

I begin to dance....

Like a puppet....

I am a slave till the end....

And it is at this end that I realize.....

As the sun rises....

We all perform like circus clowns.....

But when the sun sets.....

Is when I do my best tricks....

Reviews

[REALIZE]

This was beauty. You held me in from the beginning too. What got me was,

"I am a slave till the end....

And it is at this end that I realize.....

As the sun rises....

We all perform like circus clowns.....

But when the sun sets.....

Is when I do my best tricks...."


It was like you were looking at yourself in the mirror and realizing the truth. You also brought a change of emotion from the beginning when you say,

"With every new day there is a new beginning"

It brings inspiration for change. but by the next lines, the joyful emotion is filled with a certain darkness for whats ahead of you.

Very good write, love.