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Dormantly deceptive diabolically directed secretly secreting so suddenly slithering bacterial barrage that burrows under fragile flesh in infected mesh into grotesque pussing bile rapidly rising up to a visually vermatic volcanic crest so forth scenic surround areas in utter distress rashy red puffy contest of limited space upon an already occupied octogonic orbital obstructed face finally forming foaming white with dead blood cells mounding monstrous bumps of a teenageric terrifying hide-less hideous hell don't dare to touch or will swell opposite of subside and multiply till you wish you had died.To simplify; a pimple.

by the unknown sith

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Powerful cerebral wordplay & great overall twist at the end! It's like the poem itself was the act of squeezing our brains & then at the end you splat us with a big kick in the funny bone (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Nix is typing...]

So...I've been told this many many times for a lot of my poems, I think you would make a really good spoken word artist (I've never really considered doing it until I started at the cafe and people suggested it.) The flow is nice and the alteration is spot on. You'd probably make an audience either laugh or grimace at this, either way, you'd get claps (or snaps...I guess?) in return for your art :)

100/100

Nix ❤️️