My Queen

For our anniversary

Truthfully,

There are good and bad parts

I love you with all my heart

Sometimes, someone doesn't know it from the start 

Oblivious to the fact, 

that they just walked past the one that will forever steal their heart

O' there goes a love that you will want to forever hold

One that you will want to get old with

Every moment away from them becomes a moment missed

You didn't realize till just now,

that God just gave you the greatest gift

But when you do realize it, 

your heart explodes with glee

This is what happened to me

When I realized I had just met the last love I would ever need

My Queen.

Reviews

[Azakhiwe Dilinga]

Beautiful... these words mirror the woman that stole my heart.

[Ms claws]

The Unknown Sith, I always love it when a man has gonads enough to give credit where it is due.
Females do it up the ying-yang ad nauseum so it's refreshing when a guy does it. I applaud you!

[The Unknown Sith]

Thank for stopping by and the time!

[W. Barrett Munn]

This is some highly sophisticated rhyme.
I feel slightly unbalanced by line lengths though. Overall excellent language use.

[The Unknown Sith]

Thank you for dropping by and the review I appreciate the critic. Hopefully, I will keep that in the mind for the future. Thanks again.

[W. Barrett Munn]

The editor of Rattle Poetry Magazine
calls it plating, how the poem looks on paper, but that is an editor’s viewpoint. As artist you can do whatever you think suits the work.

[The Unknown Sith]

Copy that. I do like getting others take aways from my writing sometimes to see if the Message translated other times yeah I just write for me. Thanks again