Letter to a heartbreaker

I wish you knew,

What I desire to do

But I'm lacking the power,

To give into you.

I need more than

This simple conversation we have,

Meaningless words get thrown around

I need to feel.

I want to touch,

The damaged parts of you

But you close up,

Just like an old wound.

I crave to taste,

The sweetness of forbidden fruit

On your intoxicating lips,

So tempting, out of reach.

I dream of caressing,

With these hands of mine

Your tangled ebony strands

But dreams are fantasy.

I cannot do this,

Live forever through a lie

I've tried to heal your soul,

But you broke mine.

Reviews

[Ashley]

This evokes so much feeling in me, my exact take on love. You are right, it needs to be deep, there has to be a bigger meaning.

[abderrahmane dakir]

I like it so much. Thank you for sharing this great feeling of love.

[Beyond Our Control]

It is beautiful :) you are very descriptive about what you are wanting versus what the other is wanting. I love how you lowered the size of the font for the last line :) keep writing

[Ioana Georgiana]

Thank you. Actually, the size of the last line was accidental but now that I think about it, it kinda fits with the theme. :)

[Inject Positivity]

Superb one...Keep going....