In a Battle Without a Shield

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It doesn't seem like
Christmas.
Mom and Dad are gone,
the kids are grown; There's no
snow on the ground, and
I'm in the psych ward again.
There is a dead dog loneliness
about the place.
All the patients are asleep,
and it's too early to get
my medicine.
Coffee has replaced
vodka in my diet, and
I feel like I'm in a
battle without a shield.
Even the pen I wield
isn't as sharp as it
used to be.

Author's Note

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0-hHZ6O8u0

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Oh my God, how we crave medicine, vodka or a haze of words to shield us from that dead dog nothingness of the mind! A stunning line, Thomas.

"There is a dead dog loneliness
about the place."

I love your poetry for the simple yet profoundly touching way in which you state a truth.
Keep sharing!

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much, Divya. I appreciate it.

[DIVYA]

Loved the Title of the poem,as well.

You are most welcome Thomas. .

[red93]

In these situations, the Writing is even more important, like a veritable life-raft.
I found this strangely moving. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

[JD Major]

" ...dead dog loneliness."
Great phrase! Inspirational poem! He's still in the game, kickin'.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much for the comment and read.

[emmajoygreen]

You have really set a sad but visual scene here, Thomas. Nothing lights your fire, nothing smiles you into what should be a happy time. For sure, this might not be joyful but - you write so emotionally.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you for the comment.

[emmajoygreen]

You are more than welcome.. my words sincere