My Alice

https://www.youtube.com/shorts/uQvAa0t6VDw Here is a link to my YouTube channel where I read my poetry.

In her deadly
blue eyes, I fall down the
rabbit hole.
Down
down
down I go.
I hit the
earth like a
mock turtle on its
back;
with a smack;
like a shot to the vein.
She travels through my
bloodstream with the
force of a mad tea party.
Her hair is dormouse soft.
I touch it, and feed
her tarts, as she
rides me like
a guillotine;
sharp and final,
with a purpose;
like a porpoise with a
fish hook in
its mouth.
I hold on tight
and never let go.

Author's Note

My recently published limited edition book, Rise Up Collected Poems and Short Stories is available on Booksie.com
https://booksie.chainletter.io/i/thomaswcase888

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes Thomas. I loved how you used the language. Fishing and love. Interesting. Is love like fishing? The fish must bite before you can pull them in? Hello my friend and thank you for sharing another poetry for love.
Coyote

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you, kind sir. I appreciate it.

[Neville]

I once had an Alice too .. I must have foul hooked her because she fought like a tiger on Vaseline ..

[Thomas W Case]

Lol. Thanks, my friend. Much appreciated.

[Neville]

Always a pleasure T .. N 😎👍

[Becky R]

I loved this…
“She travels through my
bloodstream with the
force of a mad tea party”… it gave me a rush!

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you, Becky. Much appreciated.

[Pete]

some wonderland. sounds like someone's got it bad.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you, Pete. I appreciate it.

[JessyJacob]

Hi thomas,
Hope you are doing good.
Like a porpoise with a fish hook in its moutg
I hold on tight and never let go.
I like the comparison.


Thank you for sharing.

I see you are an amazing poet

Jessy Jacob

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. Much appreciated. I hope you are well.

[JessyJacob]

I am doing fine, waiting for the day where my heaven is in his hands at his home. Still i am.alone though i hav a son and him.

Jessy jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like a porpoise, proposing purpose and carrying us for the ride...yes, sensual..
My mother's name was Alice.
j.

[Thomas W Case]

Ahh. Thank you, kind sir.

[MsJewel]

It all starts with the eyes, doesn't it. Beautiful sensual poetry. :) Julie

[Thomas W Case]

Yes, it does. Thank you.