You haikus are delightfully playful and intimate. I love how each one captures these small,electric moment, the quick smiles, the whispered touches, the anticipation that hangs in the air. You manage to make every line feel alive, teasing, and full of sensation, yet nothing is overt. Everything lives in suggestion and subtlety.
Hi friend,
There is something about this poem that causes me to hesitate before answering.
The personal relationship displayed by certain words, this is not just a poem.
My heart races as I read it again and again.
This is really special. For a special person.
Beautiful.
Anticipation becomes excitement with time and with more time becomes sexual tension magnified. A wonderful write using pacing and imagery to delay gratification. Well done Thomas.
You haikus are delightfully playful and intimate. I love how each one captures these small,electric moment, the quick smiles, the whispered touches, the anticipation that hangs in the air. You manage to make every line feel alive, teasing, and full of sensation, yet nothing is overt. Everything lives in suggestion and subtlety.
Thomas W. Case was born in Oxnard. He has published 3 volumes of poetry. The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying, Artichokes, Avocados, and Van Gogh, and Seedy Town Blues. He has won several poetry contests. Hi.. more..