I sit on the tattered couch, watching the clock tick like a slow son of a b***h in an assembly line, waiting for quitting time. Fingers tapping on the armrest, heart thumping a slow and patient drum to Van Morrison’s Moondance spilling from the speakers. Shadows converge on the wall.
The street burns outside, passion and pain. Headlights flicker through the blinds. I can almost feel her steps before the door creaks, the faint scent of her heat clinging like smoke to the hallway.
I imagine my fingers caressing her orchid, her hips grinding against mine. The desire between us rises like a West Coast wildfire. My body remembers how she loves it, how I love it. How we collide, blazing, urgent, and the clock keeps its slow, apathetic click.
The key jingles in the lock. She steps inside. Sly, slick smile. The bedroom seems miles away. Hands tangled in hair. Mouths colliding. Her knees brace the couch. My body presses hard behind her. Skirt pulled up over her hips. The world has vanished. Just heat, thrusting, one with us. Covenant bliss and the clock still ticking. Helpless witness to our gravity.
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It captures the slow thrum of wanting and the way time stretches before collapsing into urgency. The heat is vivid, but what stays is the inevitability between them. That pull neither of them resists.
I do love erotica sans vulgarity. Somehow, for me, it heightens the effect. Loved also the way this one built up, from the waiting to the arrival to the consummation. Yes, in such moments the world does vanish.
Honest to god Thomas, sometimes I feel as if I am your doppelgänger, reliving through your writing my own memories. This could have been anyone’s erotic memories were it not for Moondance. Well remembered, well written my friend.
The element of time introduced to anticipation and its slowness then arrival and in sexual action the clock that now ticks on unnoticed. Time passes quickly at such times but regardless of any action it goes on. Nicely done Thomas
Thomas W. Case was born in Oxnard. He has published 3 volumes of poetry. The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying, Artichokes, Avocados, and Van Gogh, and Seedy Town Blues. He has won several poetry contests. Hi.. more..