To Touch You

quick type

If by chance I had the hand for holding you
I would sand my palms and smoothen its ridges
So fine they may glide on your knuckles and through
Its woven creases

Reviews

[PaleWriter]

This is a very touching poem which emanates deep from the well of emotions. It may be short but it has a lot of power to it. Great writing.

[Everett DeValle]

A very passionate write. Lovely. Write on.

[emman]

Maikli pero malaman.. :)

[Alexus Shanae]

I would buy this, frame it behind gorilla glass, and put it on my wall.

Lovely, passionate, it made me glad.

[BLACK PRINCE]

short but powerful. I like your style.

[khalid]

very short but has so much love and passion. i really liked it

[Matthew Smith]

For a "quick type", this was prettily written, even in its short simplicity. Those are words to melt hearts.

[MoriartyMesa]

Maybe I am just nutty, but this sort of reminds me of Pour Some Sugar On Me, by Def Leppard,


are you sure this is the right area for posting lol j.k.



nice job honestly

[de-oblitus]

this is sweet and lovely.