The day I died inside

This is about a breakup, oviously.

The day I died inside

you took apart of my life

my heart dwelled up with pain

as my world became a haze

My teary eyes,

you said you'd never forget

I guess that was a lie 

when you said I was a regret.

The things you've said that day

won't leave the past.

The words you've said

hit me hard and fast.

The day I died inside

you took apart of my life

my heart dwelled up with pain as

my world became a haze.

Author's Note

I edited the poem, hope you all like this better. It's much clearer and it makes a lot more sense.

Reviews

[Julie]

Thankyou. :)

[Wicahpi]

makes perfect sense to me.
well expressed with simplicity
that we can relate too easily.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really awesom and i love it and you di an awesome job on it

[MiidniightSoul]

Very beautiful. Your poems is filled with emotions and I liked it :)