if i had a power

If i had a power,
I woul fly
With this power i would escape
Find new places
With this power i can help people
I can change the world
You can change the world
With this power
I can see the world, i am not blinded
With this power
I am my own person
I i had a Power

Reviews

[Silver]

You have the power , you are a writer , you can change the world with your beautiful poetry

[Brielle Cartny]

Many people sadly become poisoned with power. I am glad they were convinced they were simply going to help people and not just use it for their own gain!!

[IzzyFBB]

You may not have the power to fly but you would't believe how powerful you are when you reach down deep. Great poem but I believe that the last line has a typo- I think the first I should be If?