Passion

Fear can drive one to tell someone they can't do this and that

Riding rhythms inside my head 

Shreds of doubt seem to boil in you 

My mind's made up about the words 

Birds, flying from my voice to your ear 

Please hear me, the fear, I know it creeps 

You wish the best for me and all my ambition  

Passion 

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Reviews

[Sammie Sanchez]

This is pretty good, almost wish it was longer

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Unique, I like your word choices and the form...I'm not technical Richard but I like the look and feel of this.
Starz