BEACH

Beach balls flying around

Excited children laughing 

Amber toned bodies lying around

Crashing waves swimming to land

Happy people smiling at the scene

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

Short and sweet. I like the way you've structured this poem. It leaves me reminiscing of how great the beach can be. Great work! :) oh and welcome to writer's cafe! :)

Chaos_Collector

[Tierra Starr]

I absolutely love the beach :) If i lived closer to a beach, that would be my place to escape and write. I love the beach best when its stormy out, the waves are crashing, it's cold out, and you're the only person crazy enough to be there.

[Chaos_Collector]

Lol just don't go to the beach when a hurricane is about to come by. It's not pretty

[Tierra Starr]

Haha I definitely would not be any where near where that hurricane would be hitting!

[Chaos_Collector]

Hahaah that's good to know or the hurricane would take you as a souvenir xD

[Tierra Starr]

Oh no! New meaning to swimming with the dolphins haha

[Tierra Starr]

I was totally thinking of a tsunami when I wrote that...

[Chaos_Collector]

Haha well I'd prefer not to swim with the dolphins then. That's disastrous

[Tierra Starr]

Terrifying. I'll pass on this hurricane/tsunami ride. haha

[Chaos_Collector]

You sure? If you're looking for something exhilarating to do when you're extremely bored, look no further xD jk Nahh I'd pass on it too. I don't encourage radical stuff like that.

[Tierra Starr]

Haha I wouldn't encourage it either

[Chaos_Collector]

That's a good thing. Not saying a little crazy every now and then is bad though, just not like that lol

[Tierra Starr]

Yeah, I don't think that would be considered crazy. It would be insane or a death wish! Oh man.

[Chaos_Collector]

People believe it or not go surfing when hurricane come by just so they can ride the "sick waves." lol

[Tierra Starr]

I guess it could be quite the adrenaline rush lol

[Chaos_Collector]

Lol would you rather do that or go sky diving? lol

[Tierra Starr]

Neither! Haha some one would have to force me out of a plane to go skydiving!!! And i've never surfed so I would kill myself out there.

[Chaos_Collector]

Hahaha! fair enough. I'm gonna stop commenting now because it's overloading your poem with senseless stuff lol

[Tierra Starr]

I'm fine with chitchat! lol

[Chaos_Collector]

Lol take it to the inbox then :D