Oh Tamara

My sister a letter for her

Oh Tamara I forget when we we're just kids
Oh Tammy we.we're just Catholic
When we went to the same school
A street call kissaling.
In 1969 we we're in the old country
I don't remember we we're there
Oh Tammy how could I forget
Yet I don't recall yet you still love me
One day as kids our path cross again
Homeless a day to be remembered
Only to be forgotten for years
Until dad had slept never to return
Oh Tamara how could tragedy
Bring us back together again
Yet you still love me
But now with conditions
Because I forgot you
When we we're kids.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Love should never have conditions…..but there are events or circumstances that blind us and make us forget what bonds us together in the first place….and sometimes we forget why we separate….perhaps silly reason…traded however can re-new the bond….lovely Mauricio
Warmly
B🌷

[Mauricio Montoya]

Betty its a long story and now we're old, condition because we're not kids,lol only at heart, thanks do sharing your thoughts my friend.

[Betty Hermelee]

you are very welcome!
warmly, B

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this reminded me of my best friend from school. we were inseperable, but circumstances drove me to a different continent. then, this year i paid him a visit. it had been ten years! we sat in the games room and talked all night, the rest of the week we just watched old movies and chilled out. and i remember thinking, this is the happiest i've been in a very long time.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing

[Perdition]

Sisters huh?..Got two myself...hahaha. Yeah, the greatest of weaves we love without condition but not always like, such is the heart of age and life, and yet such a wonderful thing to even have a sister. Enjoyed your recollection and sharing. Telling her you realize that she loves you still is a wonderful jester but writing her poetry hopefully breaks the thicker ice. I hope she reads it well and all continues as it should. Thank you for sharing~

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, family is a tough nut to crack, most people you'd slap in family or a sister you endure I guess when you're young you put it a side and forget but I'm old and so is she, but life passed but not hers, I can't replace.that so I wrote this poem because I haven't forgot. Thank you sharing thoughts

[Soren]

A love that lasts through misty memories but a trust that is shaken and requires proof. Lovely

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing. Thoughts.

[Thomas W Case]

Fantastic work. Ahh. memories.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you, yes memories

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Mauricio… the tender years still remain in our 💜 Heart and we become a part of the Music 🎶 where Violins play memories. Softly, Pat

[Mauricio Montoya]

Love you the same, thank you for sharing your thoughts

[Arundass TP]

Intense emotional and feelings towards Tamara expressed in beautiful way. Loved this poem. It's deep and colourful

[Mauricio Montoya]

Oh thank you very much for sharing your thoughts may all be semi with you.

[Chris Shaw]

Such a touching letter. If only those conditions were erased. Nicely expressed Mauricio. All good wishes.

Chris

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you Chris, I hope all is well