Funning

How can something so simply be so hard.
If my heart desires to be right
I've been wondering do I see the light
Or just I'm blind from the shadow
Yet right from wrong, I can't fine.
Please help me see, what I won't
Then I will be like everyone.
Wanting to come together.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

i believe you know right from wrong, so do not fret….your heart desires to be right…that is the key….your words are well thought out and beautifully stated in this piece… Bravo
warmly
B🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks Betty but its a simple write and I was drunk when I wrote it but I do appreciate your input on the other hand ur a good writer and I enjoy the read.
Thank you

[Betty Hermelee]

still a fine write….
Warmly, B🌷

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow, Thanks, yeah thanks. Betty your a gem

[emmajoygreen]

Your words and sketches are so sincere and thoughtful, Mauricio.. you have amazing abilities yet never over-state yourself or your talents.. gifts. Go safely, my friend.. please.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks Emma for dropping by I enjoy your kind words.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for your thoughts it helps.me be a better writer.

[emmajoygreen]

You've always been a better writer but never quite sure of self, sir!

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks my friend.

[D. Mansfield]

I like this alit, good writing

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks coming from you it means a lot.

[John the Baptist]

Sometimes it's difficult to tell right from wrong. But if you stay in the present moment, it may become easier.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks again