See The Times

With everything happening lets hope there is something we believe in.

Wow such decision not to be equal yet devide,
Do we love to fight or say whats not right.
World wars to stop wrong from being good.
Only to our demise, yet we stand behind it.
Yes good and evil but which would prevail.
Its not the whole who will gain in vain,
It insane that the many think so,
While the few hold faith its crazy.
But its hope we need to come together,
Before it all ends because it ether you or me
Without God, we need something to believe in.
Love for one another.
Wake up see the times.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

YES time and time again, Mauricio.

'Without God. we meed something to believe in.
Love for one another.
Wake up an' see the times.'

From start to end, you surely speak for all of us. Many thanks for sharing this finely written and inspiring poem.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Emma it just came to mind, thank you for reading but can I do better,
Thank you for sharing.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Lol, can we do better.

[NelliKong]

This was a well written piece. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. Even though it was short, the message was big in nature.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing

[John the Baptist]

An earnest plea for reason in these trying times. Yes, we must learn to come together. Yes, we must have faith. Otherwise, we may not learn to love one another.

[Mauricio Montoya]

No love for one and the other has always been inside its what you have you don't want to share them who has already before you.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A wonderful message in this poem that I totally agree with my friend. It is in difficult times that art is needed the most in order to encourage hope. And point us in the direction of our better angels. CLE

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Mauricio
I believe you are correct in sayin we all need to believe in something, perhaps to unite us….but more importantly…. we need to believe in ourselves.. that we can control our own destinies and that alone will help sustain us through these terrible times…..there is no good and evil… it us who must lead the faith and believe in ourselves
Nice write….good for discussion
Warmly, B

[Mauricio Montoya]

Ur so right, its us that must find the answer.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome!
Warmly, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I believe there is a God, but I also believe it is within all of us to make peace or not...to be good or evil.
If we can believe in each other and love...there is a chance...a valid chance.
j.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yes but only we can do this if we come together.
Thank you for sharing.

[Vol]

Mauricio,
I believe the Universe IS God... Not only does He know EVERYTHING... He is also AWARE of everything-everywhere-all at once. So when I do something... He knows, and when I DON'T do anything He knows that, too... and He doesn't Judge... He just needs to hold up a mirror for us, and when the day comes, we will judge ourselves.
Vol

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yes I agree in something's but we have to start somewhere.
Thank you for sharing.

[Sami Khalil]

A good and uplifting message for all to live by and make the world a better place.
We all need to do our part.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yes together,
Thank god for sharing.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr.
You are welcome sir.