Losted

Wow I've left where I've never been,
Yet I've been there before,
How could I recommend nor,
Remember, I'm such a loss
But I'm here, so forgotten.
I recall you where there too.
Can't leave.nor argue
What will always be true.

Reviews

[Ayesha Faiz]

Your poem feels like someone speaking straight from the heart, caught between remembering and forgetting. It’s like you’re talking about a place or a moment that you never really lived, but still feels familiar deep inside. I can feel the mix of being lost, missing something, and not being able to explain why. I get it, I feel it, we all feel it in our lives sometimes right? Your ending reveals that holding onto a truth that can't be changed... this line is just... wow.. because it's very true.
Nice write.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow you gave thought in your input Thank you but it is what is we are what we are again thank you you are very insightful.

[Arundass TP]

Emotional poem. Good work friend. Loved it

[Mauricio Montoya]

Hey love you thank you for sharing.

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. Powerful writing.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for dropping by.

[Chris Shaw]

There is such safety in being anchored and yet when we are all at sea, how frightening and lost that can feel. Emotion, well conveyed here Mauricio. All the best to you. Happy weekend.

Chris

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts yes have a great weekend.
I think I found myself, lol

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased you are anchored lol .

[Mauricio Montoya]

Lol you made my day

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you Betty, now I'm found.lol

[Betty Hermelee]

Feeling lost can be terrifying…your words are very meaningful…one must feel anchored to be safe and feel loved…
Thank you for sharing
Warmly B🙏🌷

[Neha agrawal]

It captures the feeling of being lost in time, yet anchored by something unshakable.well done.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for dropping by and sharing