Tell Me

Tell Me

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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God

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Tell me have I lost my mind,
Is it because I don't care,
Lost faith because you're,
Not there, not seen, forgotten.
How can I believe when i,
Pray never heard, forgotten.
Tell.me, tell.me I'm I lost.
Or just a memory you'll answer
Please tell.me, when I pray,
You'll be there so I will praise
Should I hold hope to know.
By your grace I'll be free.
Please tell me.

© 2025 Mauricio Montoya


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I’ve found in my own spiritual practice that God always answers my prayers, although it might take time or not be the answer I expected. For example, I’ve been praying about something for over four years, and only recently received an answer. We all have lessons to learn in our journey through life. Don’t lose your faith.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Hi M....It seems that this piece shows that God has forsaken you... and you suffer because of this... perhaps he is so busy over the holidays that he cannot bless or listen to, everyone....don't lose the faith my friend
Nice!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Mauricio Montoya

2 Weeks Ago

Its doubt but thank you for reasureing faith.
Powerful work. Great job.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Mauricio Montoya

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you! Much
Don't loose your mind. Controlled mind means healthy thoughts, Thought provoking poem

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 22, 2025
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..