Tell Me

God

Tell me have I lost my mind,

Is it because I don't care,

Lost faith because you're,

Not there, not seen, forgotten.

How can I believe when i,

Pray never heard, forgotten.

Tell.me, tell.me I'm I lost.

Or just a memory you'll answer

Please tell.me, when I pray,

You'll be there so I will praise

Should I hold hope to know.

By your grace I'll be free.

Please tell me.

Reviews

[Soren]

This appears to be a prayer in a poem well written but with a bit of doubt as to the outcome of the prayer.

[Mauricio Montoya]

No its a thought but we need hope in a world of doubt we struggle yet were told to have faith.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts,

[Soren]

You are most welcome

[Mauricio Montoya]

I got lost in thought and forgot to thank you for reading.

[Soren]

No problem

[Neville]

this is cool, I think we all look for answers .. and more so when the going gets tough .. sometimes, but only when we look hard and ask long enough, we might just find them .. Neville

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yeah it that way but mother Teresa said " if don't like change then you be the change. "

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for taking the peak

[Mauricio Montoya]

I'm sorry I forgot to thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Neville]

pleasure's mine entirely .. Neville

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Mauricio
I believe that you are beating yourself in this piece... heartfelt, from the core...surely you believe in self worth..but here I feel like you're asking GOD to fix everything... is that possible???
Nice writing
Warmly, B

[Mauricio Montoya]

Betty I wonder I have my doubts but I need hope with thing that going down.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts

[Betty Hermelee]

You are most welcome Mauricio
Warmly, B

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

An appealing poem in appeal wow. Poignant lament like. Thumbs up!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too 

[Mauricio Montoya]

Well I was drunk when I wrote it so I see my mis step but I thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

But i didn't see any mis step, its a good poem,

[LisaCarol]

I’ve found in my own spiritual practice that God always answers my prayers, although it might take time or not be the answer I expected. For example, I’ve been praying about something for over four years, and only recently received an answer. We all have lessons to learn in our journey through life. Don’t lose your faith.

[Betty Hermelee]

Hi M....It seems that this piece shows that God has forsaken you... and you suffer because of this... perhaps he is so busy over the holidays that he cannot bless or listen to, everyone....don't lose the faith my friend
Nice!
Warmly, B

[Mauricio Montoya]

Its doubt but thank you for reasureing faith.

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Great job.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you! Much

[Arundass TP]

Don't loose your mind. Controlled mind means healthy thoughts, Thought provoking poem