Those Eyes

 

Those Eyes

Those wonderful eyes have me sinking.

Along with that smile, I can't stop thinking.

I'm at a lost for words, as a sure bet.

cause there isn't enough letters in the alphabet.

yet, no matter how I try.

I can not hide,

Nor forget,

That smile,

Along with those,

beautiful eyes.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

Author's Note

something I wrote for a friend

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Eyes are not just eyes to the soul, they can be windows to a beautiful place out of this world, that is if that person you're gazing at is close to you, and from what I can read, the person described here must be very close, and very special. Simple words, with warm effects. Thanks for sharing.

[roarke]

You write your poetry with such smooth and honest words and feelings. Few can accomplish this creative state. The first four lines for me says it all. Nice poem.

[YouoweYoupay]

(Eyes are not just mirrors to the soul)** sorry about the typos.

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

its very good ^^ im sure your friend would LOVE it! ^^

[emmajoy]

What a wonderful tribute to your friend .. eyes are the mirror to the soul, as you no doubt know.